Friday, October 25, 2013

ocean boy

Posted by A Drop of Romeo at 8:50 PM
ocean boy by art by sola
he likes the sea, he's like the sea.
Banner Credit: Helen

Helen Thinks: 'Ocean Boy' by art by sola is a short, sweet poem that captivated me immediately. I believe this was thanks to the beautiful imagery created by the words that the author chose. Throughout the poem, art by sola does use rhyming words but they switching the rhyming 'on and off' which I think makes the poem catchy, as well as creating a pace in the reader's mind. The two closing lines, separated to make a stanza of their own, are – for me – the perfect touch to this poem. A beautiful summary to close off a piece of fiction that is simply breathtaking in less than fifty words.


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