bones

bones by la nuit mes yeux t'eclairent
the anatomy of a relationship, in five senses. 
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Melissa Thinks: "bones" is a wonderfully beautiful poem. With astonishing phrases like "ribbed boy breath" and "february bones", la nuit mes yeux t'eclairent writes in a way that captivates and resonates with her audience. The alliteration ("boy breath" herself a home") weaves in perfectly with the rest of the poem to create a lovely picture in your mind. From the choice of words, to the rhythm - this poem is a powerful and memorable addition to the poetry section of FictionPress.