Saturday, June 29, 2013

on your shore

Posted by A Drop of Romeo at 7:30 PM
she lived inside the ocean
Banner Credit: Marta

Marta Thinks: no.peace.los.angeles' poem is long, compared to
most of the poems on fictionpress, with its 269 words. But each of them is worth it. no.peace.los.angeles allows this to happen with the use of enjambement, which underlines each word and phrase, letting the poem create a vivid imagery that will capture you. The beginning of the poem was perhaps the most powerful part (which made the centre seem less strong), but I assure you that the last lines will still take your breath away.

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