Friday, July 25, 2014

breaths

Posted by A Drop of Romeo at 2:00 PM
breaths by a headless butterfly
inhaling is easier than exhaling.
Banner Credit: Melissa
Melissa Thinks: There is not a poem on this site that has touched me as deeply as "breaths" has. What the piece lacks in word count, it makes up for in substance. In particular, the first and last lines stand out to me as being the most meaningful - both of them channeling the poem's emotionally charged theme while helping the reader to piece together the significance of the lines caught between.

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